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One day |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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One day in the turn around the “make of love and not the tears” * will come as sun and moon naturally and artlessly into a timeless sky. ‘Tis the lack of knowing more that stifles words of furtherance but I know of the sun and moon; how beautiful, intense, and free, how passionate in need, and that bow unto each other a most essential element in the shining forth. Sun and moon and timelessness; words to harvest lovers’ needs planted, grown, and tended by the intent of heart ~ but could it be heart today a timid factory hand in manufacture, check, dispatch, of all, everything, and more that makes the people weep? Helen / 21 July 2007 - * Thank you to a friend |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a fine 'write'! I am particularly fond of: "...I know of the sun and moon; how beautiful, intense, and free, how passionate in need, and that bow unto each other a most essential element in the shining forth" AND: "Sun and moon and timelessness; words to harvest lovers’ needs planted, grown, and tended by the intent of heart" serious applause!! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you, secondhanddream poet. I greatly appreciate your comment. |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
how wonderful. I love any poem that touches upon the great love affair of sun and moon. |
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