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Looking Back |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity 
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Incandescent visions Of a dark and distant past Slowly fading memories Destined not to last Time erodes the images We keep in our minds eye It takes a vivid imagination And a strong will not to cry |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed, sounds of sadness. "late" |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Deep and well written, Elljayel. Ida |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Thanks Ida & Late, I appreciate your comments, John |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sometimes it is very painful to look back. Thankfully the "dark" memories do fade away. May your todays provide pleasant past memories for your future!   EA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your poems seem to be living my life  M |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
How dark a past you have already passed and passed soundly. It is the future that we have to live. Beautiful poem, dear John. enjoyed reading all of them Aunt Tom |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Many thanks...the love to be found within these pages is amazing |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I agree for the most part but a lot depends on the memory. Our memory is a monster. It chooses what to remember not us. |
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