Open Poetry #41 |
expositor in b-minor |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
overture like a stairway in spiral stepping down wondering the depths wandering blind recognition the scent of woman like the smell of dreams re-dreamed and worn as water on the restless edge of skin and at the bottom there dwells a sky ____________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ohhhh!! Wonderful ouverture! Love, Margherita |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you make such beautiful music D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you musical friend _________ ms gs, thank you for playing this on your mind |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I agree the orchestra is playing your composition beautifully this morning. A |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
:: Laughs :: Do you get every reply - even those edited. I could not remember how to spell "symphony" -- it all looks funny to me. Hope I made you laugh if you got all three replies. A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very interesting 'write'! serious applause!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, I read your mind, not the words..3 more please, always more..thanks hon __________ james, thank you __________ seconds, thank you for the minutes here |
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