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Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2007-10-02 07:06 PM

Refrain:
Whenever Autumn falls to land
in orange colored hue
She opens up her beauty store
especially for you

I.
September is the month of year
when Autumn slowly wakes
She's turning Summer colors brown
only few weeks it takes

II.
The roses let their petals flow
on soft wind's breeze to ground
The mice and hamsters hide their nuts
which under trees they found

Refrain:
Whenever Autumn falls to land
in orange colored hue
She opens up her beauty store
especially for you

III.
Below the yellow fallen leaves
the hedgehogs dig their holes real deep
They lower down their temperature
before they fall to sleep

IV.
The weeping willows weep some more
when they are growing bold
And men are piling stocks of wood
for stoves to keep out cold

Refrain:
Whenever Autumn falls to land
in orange colored hue
She opens up her beauty store
especially for you

V.
Soft blowing winds turn into storms
gray clouds appear in sky
The rain is forming little streams
and all the flowers die

VI.
The farmers plow their muddy land
their harvest's been brought in
The cows lie in their stables warm
soon winter will begin

Refrain:
Whenever Autumn falls to land
in orange colored hue
She opens up her beauty store
especially for you

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2007-10-02 07:17 PM

Very pretty, Titia. love, joyce

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2007-10-02 07:30 PM

Titia~
This is awesome !
Just so totally AWESOME~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~
~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2007-10-02 07:40 PM

Wow Titia! This is fantastic.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

4 posted 2007-10-03 04:41 AM

Enjoyed. Thank you ."late"

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2007-10-03 08:44 AM

You've described it so well~~

M

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2007-10-03 11:23 AM

nice read

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

7 posted 2007-10-03 01:40 PM

You've opened a beautiful store of autumn poetry. Loved it!

Robert

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

8 posted 2007-10-03 08:03 PM

I would love to be able to put things into words like this! I love it!

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

9 posted 2007-10-03 11:41 PM

Titia, Autumn is my favourite season and you describe it so well. Very well written.
great poem much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2007-10-04 08:07 AM

Enjoyed this greatly. Truly beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2007-10-04 11:43 AM

Oh, Titia! What a lovely ballad! Now if only I were able to listen to it! That would be the cherry on top ~ or the colorful crown on the maple! lol

Thoroughly enjoyed!

Sending you a warm, autumnal hug,

Linda

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

12 posted 2007-10-04 08:41 PM

Thanks to all who took the time and effort to read my little scribblings.

And Linda, you definitely wouldn't want to hear me singing LOL My voice will scare the crocodiles out of the water.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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