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Open Poetry #41

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-10-02 11:27 AM

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The sea
Slowly laps the shore
While clouds drift across
The face of a stolid silver moon

Occasionally a star
Will sparkle
Only then to disappear
Water falling
From wooden eaves

No crickets singing
In the weeds
Even the cat
With its feral courage
Chooses now to stay in

One can feel
Again the leaves
Begin to change

In the cold autumn rain

.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-10-02 12:31 PM

Autumn's breath is felt here.

Very good!

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2007-10-02 01:24 PM

I love autumn and this poem.
Ida

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2007-10-02 05:08 PM

I feel the tinge of snow in the air. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-10-02 05:39 PM

Enjoyed...James

clawmute
Junior Member

since 2007-10-01

Posts 24
Arkansas, USA

5 posted 2007-10-02 05:53 PM

I liked this simplicity. Thanks!

KNOWLEDGE IS A DEFENSE AND MONEY IS A DEFENSE, BUT THE EXCELLENCY OF WISDOM IS THAT IT GIVES LIFE TO THEM THAT HAVE IT. I DO NOT WRITE FOR OTHERS, BUT

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2007-10-02 06:03 PM

There is frost in the air in this one.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

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