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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-09-29 06:11 AM

Shyly Parts The Dark

Full cheek moon, swathes shadow play
Impeccable such slight of hand, delight of day
Wee hours cooled as frost white breath
So modest swoons when dark is left

Two-toned commencements rise and fall
Preamble dawn invisible
Alas, the wheat bowed head and stem
Distinctive skirts slide rising hem

Shall not be told aggressive tales
The time is taken as night pales
In slender fingers plied of gold
Now morning secrets will be told

Copyright Kkh 9/29/07

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2007-09-29 07:18 AM

enjoyed how this uncovers...well done

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2007-09-29 10:39 AM

I most certainly agree with Dark...a delight
of a read.

PoppaLoco
Member

since 2007-09-23

Posts 83
EU, NL, Limburg

3 posted 2007-09-29 11:48 AM

Leaves a vague but very heavy print behind in my mind.. Can't quite put my finger on it. Appreciating your deep/complex writing!
Pops

LukeMW
Junior Member

since 2006-03-01

Posts 15
Canada

4 posted 2007-09-29 11:50 AM

very classic. nice and beautiful.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-09-29 11:39 PM

"The time is taken as night pales
In slender fingers plied of gold
Now morning secrets will be told"

Wonderful TD.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

Tears-of-Sanity
Member

since 2007-09-05

Posts 121
Kingdom Hearts

6 posted 2007-09-30 02:26 AM

Very cool and tender... cold in some parts.
Over all, it is great.. I enjoyed it quite a lot

Tears of Sanity~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2007-10-02 01:29 PM

quote:
Shall not be told aggressive tales
The time is taken as night pales
In slender fingers plied of gold
Now morning secrets will be told

Intriguing and so efficiently rendered, dear TD.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2007-10-02 03:02 PM

A nice flow...James

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2007-10-02 06:27 PM

Shall not be told aggressive tales
The time is taken as night pales
In slender fingers plied of gold
Now morning secrets will be told

the entire poem was magnificant, but this, was sheer poety...rolled right off the tongue...and heart and mind....

big smiles atcha

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