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Absolute Absence
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Absolute Absence |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I see your face in this place every day. Your footsteps resonate in every room, I hear the sound of your voice loud and booming in every corner turned the courtesy of a hello. We are but driftwood floating, separately on an open sea, but I don't know you and you don't know me. We are both trying to find our way back to some peaceful shore but you're not here, anymore. "In yearning for nothing, you will be free to enjoy what you do, free to see the patterns, free to hear the music in all things." |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
This is good John |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your heart perceives this absence and renders it with true poetic power, dear Donna. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very good, Donna. Tell it like it is. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
YES, this is VERY good indeed! Applause!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am humbled by your kindness, each of you. My thanks to all, and hugs. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Goodness this is sooo good!! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Don't loose heart Donna we are all on your side, think positive, and good luck to you. LindsayP |
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