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Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2007-09-28 06:14 PM

Down by the sea
Where the dolphins like to play
Is a special little place
Where I just think and lay

Hot sandy beach
Feels so good against my skin
As I let all my cares go
Release all the emotions within

Down by the sea
Someone waits for me
A person I haven't seen in a long time
Allowing me to be free

That person is myself
The warm sun shines on my face and hair
Doesn't matter what tomorrow holds
For right now I haven't a care

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

moondogz
Member

since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

1 posted 2007-09-28 06:19 PM

Good for you Aimster, providing a safe haven for your "inner self", thanks for sharing...very nice imagery.
moon.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

2 posted 2007-09-28 09:50 PM

It is nice to have a place to go where you can let your problems dissapear for a while,

much enjoyed Aimster.

Lindsay

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2007-09-29 02:33 AM

It is such solace to have a place and a moment to be yourself, freely and expressively. I enjoyed your poem, Amy.

- Owl

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-10-01 02:31 PM

Nice writing...James

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2007-10-02 01:48 AM

Down by the sea is my favourite place to be, I feel the peace and serenity

Hope

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2007-10-02 02:39 AM

We all should have more moments like that in our life!

~ Communing with Nature and one's self!

A pleasurable read!

Linda

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

7 posted 2007-10-03 01:42 PM

Down by the sea . . . you carried me with you there! Beautiful!

Robert

veniceflorida
Junior Member

since 2007-10-03

Posts 22
Florida

8 posted 2007-10-03 02:29 PM

Great visual poem .... Aimster. I could feel the warmth as I read it.

Lynn

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

9 posted 2007-10-03 08:09 PM

Down by the sea is the greatest place... a great write!!

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

10 posted 2007-10-04 01:25 AM

This is lovely Aimster, stay free.."late"

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