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effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

0 posted 2007-09-30 12:29 PM

10,000 thunderbolts rain down from the sky
For we did not heed the warning
And I fear by morning
That everyone will die

Although it was a long time coming
The writing was on the wall
And we only have ourselves to blame
As the architects of our downfall

When the seas begin to boil
And all the trees are ablaze
Mankind drops to it's knees
And everybody prays

As we cower in fear a torrent of tears
Turns to blood as they leave our eyes
And everything we took for granted
Begins to vaporize

Now it is too late to point the finger
Looking for somone else to take the blame
As the earth turns into a ball of fire
A carbon copy of the sun
We must all share the blame
Each and everyone

And life on earth as we know it
Shall then cease to be
As two suns burn in the solar system
For all eternity

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2007-09-30 12:33 PM

very well done

LOVED IT

i am a newbie myself Too
i have just posted some poems too!

ARCTIC WIND

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

2 posted 2007-09-30 12:36 PM

Thanks for taking the time to reply and for your kind words, as you know when you get a response it encourages to you go on and (hopefully) improve, I shall now go and check yours out and hope to see you around the site in the future, Cheers ! John

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-10-06 07:21 AM

Nice writing...James

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-10-06 10:55 AM

Mankind should heed the signs or we most assuredly will be the "Architects of Destruction".

Gaia is screaming ~ but are we listening?!?

Love, Peace, Harmony & Mother Nature

EA

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-10-06 11:50 AM

Lightning from the sky is such a wonderful sight

beautiful Poem

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2007-10-06 07:35 PM

This is powerful. It is not too late yet, some nations are showing the way ... may humanity awaken and be aware of what's going on and react with respect and love to our world.

Very well done.

Love,
Margherita

LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

7 posted 2008-03-08 11:46 AM

only caring heart get bothered. Most...heartless at all.
deep thinking.
Aunt T

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