Open Poetry #41 |
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Waves |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
Waves The empty space I was trying to fill. Wasn't satisfied with this placebo pill. It's a smorgasbord with no end in sight. On two cups of java I can surf all night. Ride the wave 'till it breaks on shore. Then find a new thread and surf some more. Round and round it's an endless dance, until I wake up and come out of this trance. |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Are you sleeping or awake? not sure here, but ain't that the case sometimes? I've had dreams so real I can't tell and daydreams so invovled I'm not sure I am really awake. What a thin line to define by an active mind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Been there! Done that! Oh boy, do I ever know what you mean!!! Well stated! Excuse me, it's time for my nap! I've been up all night surfing the net! lol ![]() Hugs to you ~ and a cup of java or two! EA |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Have you noticed tha most poets are insomniacs. I am. Maybe someone should do a study on insomniac poets. Ha Ha |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
Upon my waking, I always feel that placebo, and the emptyness comes back. Sad sad poem to me, appreciated it a lot! Pops |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
Thanks everyone for shining your "LIGHT" on my "Waves." moon. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm still burning the midnight oil! ~ I think I must have had one too many javas! ![]() ![]() EA |
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