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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2007-09-30 09:52 AM

I have loved the all of you, the light beyond the
moon’s darkened rim, the stone cast to the last
dousing skip, the breath that touched my lips as
my own did yours in the pale sultry color of
a smooth silk covered peach.

I have cried, countless the tears that escape the
rim of my eyes, falling silently into the awaiting
pool that forms and ebbs, grows and then dies
silently among the cracks of broken earth.

I have dreamt, dreaming of moments that await
us, moments that carry the earth into the palms
of our hands...as we mourn the loss that haunts
me, the one last river that has carried me into
the waiting dawn....as I once again await a
lonesome river....and stars fall from the
mountains to our sea.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-09-30 12:45 PM

Nice writing...James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2007-09-30 02:46 PM

Overflowing with feeling.
Well done.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2007-09-30 02:53 PM

Magnus~
GAWD ... this is gorgeous~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-09-30 02:56 PM

Oh, yes, dear poet, you are a man who knows about love and you write about it with such depth ~ and ever so poetically.

Warm hug and an understanding smile,

Linda

PoppaLoco
Member

since 2007-09-23

Posts 83
EU, NL, Limburg

5 posted 2007-09-30 04:56 PM

"as I once again await a
lonesome river"

Very, very touching. You're very hard pressed if you want to get me sad, but I feel the melancholy.
Pops

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

6 posted 2007-09-30 11:42 PM

Written with great feeling Magnus but always remember that no matter how low we are feeling, the sun will always rise again.
and hopefully, before too long you will be able to smile again. good luck my friend.

Lindsay

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2007-10-01 12:05 PM

Barry...so very full! I'm always impressed with your expressions of love, unafraid.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2007-10-02 12:50 PM

So very touching, dear Barry, and beautifully rendered motions of your heart.

Love,
Margherita

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2007-10-09 05:38 PM

beautifully written Barry~~

M

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2007-11-05 02:21 PM

I have to agree with Marge... gorgeous, indeed! *S*

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