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Bubble Bath |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Bubble Bath In a bathtub that’s teeming with bubbly brew Of strawberry beads in a hot misty stew I carefully step into smooth oozing broth Topped with a tingling tickling froth Into the balm of white billows I slip To savor the scent of a pillowy dip Soapy and sudsy and slippery soft So lusciously plushy, the bubbly loft Wrapped in caresses of fluffy light foam Lathered in spume of a puffy white dome Buoyant and cushiony tingle and tang Soft of soufflé and the puff of meringue Now light up a candle and soak to the core And please DO NOT ANYONE knock on the door! Elizabeth Santos |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Elizabeth, I just love your poetry, You have a wonderful sense of rythym. Lindsay |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love it Liz~~ my favorite time of the day/evening M |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LovelyLizzyLady~ Ahhhhhhhhhhhh ... sooooooooo refreshingly good !! Love the playful rhymes~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Only you my dear friend can write about a bubble bath with such poise a finese  Makes me want to go take one right now Ruth I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S |
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