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Open Poetry #41

Until Time Returns

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-09-26 06:25 PM

Until Time Returns

Once again I find
myself watching
this woman that
I love to know,
admiring her
natural beauty
and wondering if
she knows all the
grace that she
shows within the
brillance of her glow,
as I appreciate this
woman that is living
this moment with me,
the sweetness and the
softness of her personality,
making my World
brighten up
with her smile,
allowing me to
linger for awhile,
until happiness
fills my heart,
until time returns
to take us apart.

JamesLee
26Septembre
2007

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2007-09-26 08:15 PM

good

John

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

2 posted 2007-09-27 12:21 PM

Nice write James, enjoyed

Lindsay

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-09-27 11:17 AM

Wow, James, this too has a wonderful sound, the happiness is felt. These moments are so precious.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-09-27 03:32 PM

Thank you Huan, Lindsay and Margherita for the wonderful responses...James

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-09-27 06:07 PM

Very nice.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

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