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Nomenclature: Dream
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Nomenclature: Dream |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nomenclature: Dream What buds the deeper colors of September That leaves now shed of vital green remember Original by nature, vibrant light spelled gold and amber Along the thorn sweet sound of raspberry murmur Remember, remember! Nourished all this time on wistful summer wine Still warm in winter’s glow, arms wide to catch the snow to vine Waiting, always waiting, open heart anticipating Let the firelight, that moves with supple fingers ‘round Slip along your silhouette, libations bound The tease of my deep litmus images consort to these Set waiting in the pause of dawn, seasons moving on Remember, remember! As the harvest lay so calm Nor would I burn the memory that echoes past Leave out part or parcel where my dreams are cast Oh, but for you, my heart would move the sun traverse Against the moon, and linger long affections purse And dream until my death may snuff of imperfections The heart of matters sign a sigh, though nigh, directions true Nor could I dream another more my soul content, as you Copyright Kkh 9/11/07 |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"The tease of my deep litmus images consort to these Set waiting in the pause of dawn, seasons moving on Remember, remember! As the harvest lay so calm Nor would I burn the memory that echoes past Leave out part or parcel where my dreams are cast" Such warmth in this write. This is beautiful. JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
Wonderful feelings attached to a wonderful poem... I enjoyed it |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A pleasant ‘write’!: Numerous grand lines and ‘imagery’: “the deeper colors of September”; “thorn sweet sound of raspberry”; “wistful summer wine”; “Let the firelight, that moves with supple fingers ‘round Slip along your silhouette”; “Images… …waiting in the pause of dawn, seasons moving on”; Applause! |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Wonderful piece. I love the imagry. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was really good!!!!!!!!! |
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