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Enchantress
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Canada eh.

0 posted 2007-09-26 02:45 PM


      
                       Autumn puffed in-

         Announcing a change in wind-
The morning sun paints the sky electric blue
        a festive backdrop to nature's last
                    party before winter.


                    The woods celebrate-
giddy, swaying, drunk with earth nectar...
Trees dance with the strong breezes until gowns
          blazing in copper, scarlet, and gold
       rustle, flutter, and whirl to the ground.


                    The sun departs-
A haze of smoke from ancient Indian fires
           clings to the blue-grey horizon:
Reluctant revelers silently slip into frosty slumber
           And wait for the warm kiss of spring to
                   Invite them to her annual ball.

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© Copyright 2007 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2007-09-26 02:46 PM



She's back...and beautifully so!




Enchantress
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2 posted 2007-09-26 02:49 PM


Ahhh thank you so much Karilea!!!
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2007-09-26 03:02 PM


Huge smile.....welcome home sweet lady. What a beautiful write you have gifted us with!! hugs.  
MoonShadow
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4 posted 2007-09-26 03:13 PM


Much too long to wait for such a
   gift of colorful imagery.

        MoonShadow
.

Waterfall27
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5 posted 2007-09-26 03:13 PM


beautiful write welcome back.
huges
christine

Enchantress
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6 posted 2007-09-26 03:46 PM


Donna, Ken and Christine..
Thank you so much for the welcome home.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-09-26 03:58 PM


Wonderful...James
JL
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8 posted 2007-09-26 04:05 PM


Happy days are here again!!
Good to read you again!

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

SmartChick
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9 posted 2007-09-26 04:14 PM


Oh Nancy, it is so good to see you back, again. This is absolutely beautiful.
Enchantress
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10 posted 2007-09-26 04:34 PM


James, JL, Sue...
Home never felt so good!
Hugs and thank you all.

~Autumn the year's last loveliest smile~

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2007-09-26 04:34 PM


a beautiful poem

ARCTIC WIND

Enchantress
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12 posted 2007-09-26 04:36 PM


Thank you Arctic Wind.
I don't believe we've met..
guess I have some catching up to do.

scorpio
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13 posted 2007-09-26 04:50 PM


Ah..it is wonderful to read your poetic offerings once more.  You have been missed.  Glad to see you home once again Tinker.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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14 posted 2007-09-26 04:53 PM


Hi dear scorpio!
'Tis good to know when one has been missed.
Big hugs and grins.

~Autumn the year's last loveliest smile~

Paul Wilson
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15 posted 2007-09-26 05:35 PM


Nancy...Just great to read you again, really hoping you are fine. Can't wait till old man winter graces us with his presence once again like you have...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Enchantress
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16 posted 2007-09-26 05:39 PM


Hello Paul...thank you so much for writing to me and expressing your concern.
Your friendship is appreciated more than you know.  

~Autumn the year's last loveliest smile~

Toerag
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17 posted 2007-09-26 06:42 PM


where ya been gal....???...Same place as me/...gone...?...Hospital....picking out a cemetary plot?...where?
Marchmadness
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18 posted 2007-09-26 07:22 PM


What a beautiful poem, You painted a picture on my mind.
                       Ida

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19 posted 2007-09-26 07:34 PM


EnchantedLady~
You KNOW how much I've missed seeing the beauty of your ink on these pages~

Nance, this is so beautiful ... you just take a vacation anytime you want ... as long as you bring back something as lovely as this to share~

I LOVE YOU~
Yep ... that's the way it is~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com   

Martie
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20 posted 2007-09-26 07:45 PM


Hello Nancy...I'm happy to read your words again ... as always, they are beautiful, just as you are.
Enchantress
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21 posted 2007-09-26 09:23 PM


Hi Toe!  Yup that sounds like me a lot.
But I'm not goin' till my name is called.  

Marchmadness~Thank you so much!  I don't believe we have met.. Hugs.

Marge~ My dear dear friend..thank you for the inspire and encouragement. Love you.

Martie~I know I've been away quite awhile..thank you for keeping the porch light on for me.

Enchantress
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22 posted 2007-09-27 09:45 AM


THERE'S NO PLACE LIKE HOME!

~Autumn the year's last loveliest smile~

Misty Lilacs
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23 posted 2007-09-27 03:11 PM


Hi Nancy, I am so happy to see you back here and writing again. Writing a most beautiful piece, I might add.

hugs, Marti

Enchantress
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24 posted 2007-09-27 03:16 PM


Hello Marti!
Good to see you again as well.
I do hope you are well.
Hugs and thank you, Nancy

~Autumn the year's last loveliest smile~

arthur
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25 posted 2007-09-28 10:56 AM


as always beautifully descriptive
You are not allowed to give up writing
You need a change of horizon
Imagine you were a fish( or an elk)-then what?
As for me-I have lost it completly
I can barely write my own address-where did it go?
Love arthur xxxx

Enchantress
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26 posted 2007-09-28 11:21 AM


Hello Michael!!
Oh I'm not allowed to give up writing but you...you who have been my mentor, my source of encouragement through the years can just say 'it's gone'?  I think not.  Give it a break..it will come back.
Please stay in touch.
Love and hugs across the pond, Nancy

~Autumn the year's last loveliest smile~

vandana
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27 posted 2007-09-28 11:28 AM


nice read
Enchantress
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28 posted 2007-09-28 02:22 PM


Thank you vandana...it's good to see you again.
secondhanddreampoet
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29 posted 2007-09-28 07:44 PM


simply excellent 'write';
grand-fine 'read'!

v. serious, long-sustained applause!!  

Goodknight
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30 posted 2007-09-30 01:52 PM


Hi Nancy - good to read your wonderful poetry here again!!!
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31 posted 2007-09-30 02:04 PM


Oh yeah,  you know that I have missed you
bunches, we all have....I hope that you stay well, or continue to mend, whichever the
case may be.....and you have no idea how
I would love to bass fish...that is my fav.
fishing sport....my largest, a large mouth
that weighed nine pounds and four ounces.
Won me 780.00 in a tournament for largest
fish.....

I miss it and have missed you....

inkedgoddess
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32 posted 2007-09-30 02:16 PM


feels like a festival coming on........sweet !!!
ThisDiamond
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33 posted 2007-09-30 06:27 PM


Hey There Nancy:

Enjoyed this write a second time.  I miss you too.  Hope all is well.

Kathy

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34 posted 2007-11-05 02:00 PM


I know I'm very late in responding... but then... fall saunters into the south, leaving us roasting through September. *S*

I think this ball features everything from ballet to break dancing. *S* What a beautiful invitation you've written! *S*


vandana
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35 posted 2007-11-09 11:02 AM


good read
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36 posted 2007-11-09 11:51 AM


To be gently honest, you're wonderful

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
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37 posted 2007-11-09 11:56 AM


My goodness!
I was so surprised to see this one resurrected this morning.

Thank you all so very much!
Hugs to all my poet friends.

~Autumn the year's last loveliest smile~

secondhanddreampoet
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38 posted 2007-11-09 08:04 PM


one more time, I must reiterate...these are simply superb!!

continuing VERY serious and long-sustained applause!
[a poetic 'standing ovation' for this grand-fine 'write!']

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Gaia
39 posted 2007-11-09 08:36 PM


YIPPEE!!! I found a Nancy write!
Good to read you again. This is as lovely as all the others you've gifted us with over the years.

Earth Angel
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40 posted 2007-11-10 02:54 AM


Enchanting One, I read this autumnal beauty when you posted it, but I thought I would read it again and post another reply. ~ But lo and behold, I found that I hadn't posted a reply when I read it the first time! Well, better late than ever!

I have missed you and your poetry to the max! I also have been thinking of you and have sent loving, healing Light your way.

I am so pleased that this lovely was brought back up so that your fans get to enjoy your talent while you are on 'hiatus'.

Love to you, Nice Nancy!

Linda

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