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Open Poetry #41

Rippling Winds of Time

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-09-25 10:31 PM

Rippling Winds of Time

An endless ebony sky
caresses the still, cold
  mountain-moon…
a lantern hung on the
  highest peaks
to tease the first bright
  evening-star,
with a light that brushes
the stairs of heaven,
and shakes the saddened
  soul,
to illuminate the lonely
  mind,
that all the world of men
is but tiny ripples passing…
on the winds of time!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2007-09-25 11:00 PM

"a lantern hung on the
highest peaks
to tease the first bright
evening-star"

~sighing~
Wish I could paint this!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2007-09-26 02:03 PM

Wonderful insights, Beautiful picture.
Ida

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

3 posted 2007-09-26 03:38 PM

Especially enjoyed this part:

"stairs of heaven,
and shakes the saddened
  soul,
to illuminate the lonely
  mind,
that all the world of men
is but tiny ripples passing…
on the winds of time!"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-09-26 04:31 PM

Nice read

ARCTIC WIND

Dull Glitter
Junior Member

since 2007-09-25

Posts 11
Iowa, USA

5 posted 2007-09-26 08:13 PM

I enjoyed reading this. It really paints a picture in my mind.

"with a light that brushes
the stairs of heaven,
and shakes the saddened
soul,"

This part stood out to me especially.
Good job.

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