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spunkygirl
Junior Member

since 2007-09-18

Posts 46

0 posted 2007-09-25 02:14 AM

It's time to let you go my friend
It's time to say goodbye
Don't think I don't love you
Please don't wonder why

We should have left it as it was
Instead of talking on the phone
I'm sorry for the inconvenience
of blowing your ear so

I'll keep you in my prayers
You'll be in my thoughts too
I hope you have a nice life
lord knows I really do

It was fun remembering
It was good to hear your voice
I think we need to let it go
I think we have no choice

They say "You made Your Bed
So lay down in it slow"
I say you've got your future
Where your past just shouldn't go

The only obligation here
Is the promise that you carry
Don't let this affect that
No more regrets for you old weary

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-09-25 11:00 AM

quote:
I'll keep you in my prayers
You'll be in my thoughts too
I hope you have a nice life
lord knows I really do

You have clarity and you are also generous.

Well written piece.
Love,
Margherita

spunkygirl
Junior Member

since 2007-09-18

Posts 46

2 posted 2007-09-25 11:13 AM

Margherita

Thank You for reading me! I am glad you liked it.

PoppaLoco
Member

since 2007-09-23

Posts 83
EU, NL, Limburg

3 posted 2007-09-25 12:27 PM

I wonder what inspired a poem like that. Your words really do make it sound like true friendship, beautiful.

Pops

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2007-09-25 07:38 PM

Spunky,

I felt this deep down inside! Your poem says it all...saying goodbye although sometimes is the right thing, it hurts like hell. Ahhhhh bittersweet. I know a thing or two about that.

Take care,

Amy

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

5 posted 2007-09-26 12:13 PM

Enjoyed your poem Spunky Girl, I'm sure you have kind and caring nature. Take care.

LindsayP

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-09-26 04:31 PM

Very sweet!

nice job

ARCTIC WIND

Sekishu
Junior Member

since 2007-09-17

Posts 36

7 posted 2007-09-26 06:20 PM

This is a very good poem and it reminds me maybe too much of past experiences. I hope to see more great poetry like this.

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