Open Poetry #41 |
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Trudy |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan ![]() |
. Listen to her Prattle on As if one in this game Has much of a choice In the matter I think I’m too old For this dating thing I’ve been drafted in By being single And merely here Still I suppose That under her clothes There are the remains Of certain advantages And the weekend is long And we’re all easily bored And I’ve nothing Better to do . |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wow! Huan Yi, We all get old (male and female) but for some reason only women are criticized for being rude enough to age. Perhaps as she was prattling, she was wondering what was under your clothes. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh, oh, seems like you broke one of the rules...something about never telling a woman shes old or fat, or something like that. Of course, you didn't tell her, you only thought it...so you're all right, but then again you wrote about it, so you may not be allright...just joking around...I hope women realize that men don't like being told these things either...James |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thanks Both This is not an actual event; few of my things are historical. I took a subject gave it a mood to see who or what happens. I don't write personals. Thanks again John |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
My apologies, John. Ida |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
I'm not sure that's a theme of old age only, but very well pictured. So much meaning in so simple a scene. Pops |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Pops, Thanks And you're right John |
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