Open Poetry #41 |
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Shades of Blue |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC ![]() |
"I'm sorry" Those words sound even hollow to me How does one erase a lifetime of pain? I hope you are now somehow free All these years and I never knew The pieces of the puzzle now fit The story finally makes sense Feeling it in my gut, like I was the one hit It was all for nothing Wasteful, and it did not need to be The image looking back in the mirror Parts of you I truly see in me I'm not even able to fathom What each day must have been like for you Never knowing if you'd wake to tomorrow Paints a whole new shade of blue If given the chance What could I possibly say? You gave me a better life In the end you had to pay A debt so high No mother should have to decide Between her child Or her own life You chose me, one cold April day Now I live a life of luxury While you are buried without even a stone Words do hurt, they do break bones Today I give to you A gift from high above I give you my heart The gift of love "Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away" To my Mom Becky. May you rest in forever peace. You are finally free! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
VERY TOUCHING love it ARCTIC WIND [This message has been edited by Artic Wind (09-24-2007 10:04 PM).] |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
Amazing how you manage bring up both the deepest despair and the most fragile hope in one poem, or the several poems I've seen from you. Admiring your strength, Pops |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a lovely tribute to your mother. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Amy. You expressed your feelings very well. I know that your Mom knows all the mixed emotions that you have experienced ~ and that you love her still. "Today I give to you A gift from high above I give you my heart The gift of love" ~ A gift beyond measure. ![]() Loving hug, Linda |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Lovely words Aimster, written with love, And I'm sure Mom will love it. Lindsay |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Thanks for your beautiful heartfelt replies! I hope that my Mom likes this...suppose she is reading it from heaven. ![]() Amy "Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away" |
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