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Science of 'Love'
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Science of 'Love' |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
A chemical equation to explain my whole life to mark centuries of strife Rooted at our eldest tradition Bothering me, deep down. Looking at my own little thoughts circle around you like a golden sphere telling myself there’s no logic in them it’s all mother nature’s work here So lets step back take a breath and admit that love’s no more than chemistry Ever considered your little substances connecting and exchanging with mine unnoticed under every spoken line turning on natural grievances pulling me apart. Laughing at my silly head to adore you so sillily right now its all too obvious, telling myself there’s not a why, just a how so let’s stay cool and let cold thought conquer the sweetest juice in life Till finally I can say, I’d never thought I’d See But today’s the day That reason killed me |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WOW, another interestiong topic of yours Well, written ARCTIC WIND |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I especially love the ending!: "Till finally I can say, I’d never thought I’d See But today’s the day That reason killed me(!)" Applause!! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."Laughing at my silly head to adore you so sillily right now its all too obvious, telling myself there’s not a why, just a how so let’s stay cool and let cold thought conquer the sweetest juice in life"... Hmmm...easier said than done, huh? The degree of difficulty, putting the heart out there...is a +10. I liked the whole poem. A great style.  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Again, what a loving poem ARCTIC WIND |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
Amazing feedback.. thanks everyone! Your words help me even appreciate my own poetry more, and self appreciation is a beautiful gift to anyone. Thanks. Pops |
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