Open Poetry #41 |
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Gentlemen, Start Your Engines!!!!!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania ![]() |
Gentlemen, Start Your Engines !!!! I headed down to Dover Where bright colors fly the breeze Where speed’s a drug that gets you high And brings you to your knees Addicted to the fast lane And adapted to the noise Your heart beats much more rapid beats For all those racing boys It is will and thrill and grueling chill And guts that pack the stands It’s like a separate way of life Among those racing fans They sang the national anthem With bombs bursting in the air The crowd was revving up To watch their heroes do or dare Gentlemen, start your engines!!!! Things were just about to start And it was number 20 Who had claimed a child’s heart My companion was a ten year old So much more in the know And this was heaven ‘s heaven to him As far as races go A myriad of colors Swung the curve and flew on by But orange was the color That was in a child’s eye There was Earnhardt and Andretti There was Newman, Busch and Green But 20 was the number that was Speeding through a dream Four hundred monster miles And four hundred grueling laps A normal day for heroes And for race-crazed fans perhaps The bleachers packed up to the sky And coolers brimmed with beer The faithful camper city staking claims From year to year Adults with car shaped lunch boxes And wild good luck charms Insignias on baseball caps On necks and legs and arms But eyes were on the oval track And nerves were frayed and tense The race restarted many times With rules that don’t make sense With only sixteen laps to go And metal on their heels The speed of expectation Was the speed of smoking wheels Velocity, no issue All were game to push the max With trophies on the finish line And racers on their backs And then it came, the nightmare lap When one bounced off the side And five more cars at bullet speed Were destined to collide But praise the Lord, they walked away At a quite humbled pace With number twenty still alive And vibrant in the race A little boy upon his feet Two little ayes were wide And there were dreams of trophies that He harbored deep inside The race was over, Edwards claimed That sweet elusive prize But it was number twenty Who was champion in his eyes For my grandson’s tenth birthday, his present was a day at Nascar In Dover with his grandmother. It was a blast! Still reeling with that feeling! Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (09-24-2007 10:21 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
NASCAR is very addictive, indeed. My husband and I have been fans for close to 30 years now. I miss all those faces of the past, but glow in the hearts of the new cast the sons of grandfathers who brought joy to the girls and all the boys... Bravo, Elizabeth, for giving your grandson a memory he will never forget! |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Wonderful poem...even more wonderful for your grandson. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So bright and full of enthusiasm! Beautiful and of course exciting for the little boy. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
My husband was a racing fan, too bad I can't show him this poem, He might have become interested in poetry as well. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Racing has never been my kind of hobby, but well done, i was iterested in the title ARCTIC WIND |
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