Open Poetry #41 |
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A little bit on Unconditional Love / Worship |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
What difference if the words don’t hit When grammar breaks its feeble legs And crashes down on the insecure What would become of art if all paint dies When throats grow too dry and frail for song And all are naked, unprotected When these words fade from their fragile slate And my voice loses its place to guttural sounds Only skinny limbs left to worship you What difference, my skinny limbs will spasm for you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
Thank you!! I have a feeling my style doesn't quite fit in, but here to learn from all those awesome poets. Maybe I should produce some emotions more easily related to haha.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, I don't know that you're not a good fit. I think we are all open to new styles... and if you stay around long enough, some of ours may appeal to you, as well. Welcome to Passions, Poppa. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful Poem AGAIN! ARCTIC WIND |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
Sunshine -- Thank you so much!! Couldn't have asked for a warmer welcome. This must be the most friendly forum I've ever seen, haha. Arctic, thank you! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Poppa... ![]() It is! ![]() |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Poppaloco, I think you fit in just fine, I think there should be a variety of style and opinions. That's what makes poetry interesting and fun. Ida |
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