Open Poetry #41 |
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Mike's song |
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spunkygirl Junior Member
since 2007-09-18
Posts 46 |
Oldest by default you see His brother died in bed His siblings sung his praises Tu Santo was what they said At age 5 he was the man of the house His father was detained Across the Mexican boarder So little man was his name His cousins were pachucas They wore blades up in there hair He'd watch them fight Oh, what a sight Say cat fight and he was there. At 17 he enlisted In our navy fair Ready to fight for our country They said see you when you're mature At 18 he enlisted in the army as you see He was eager to do his part In the Korean conflict For his country He served his country well and got a wound here and there But it was when he came home That his life went to hell As he walked his last few miles home Someone hit him with a car Left him to die all alone Thank God he wasn't ready to depart He made it through okay With the help of some morphine And the beautiful woman he married It all seemed like a bad dream He had 4 doting children Who adored this dear man so They gave him nine grandchildren Before he was to go The last of the grandchildren Benefited so As she lived the closest So he visited her the most He'd take her out driving To the duck park and you see He'd have to chase after her She was just a wee thing His health it was failing now But he still drove around I trusted God to protect them both Whilst they be out and around His siblings that survive him Call him Santo don't you know For this means Saint and for 20 years He's been on God's playground |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You sang Mike's Song with such a tender voice pen. "His siblings that survive him Call him Santo don't you know For this means Saint and for 20 years He's been on God's playground" ![]() Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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spunkygirl Junior Member
since 2007-09-18
Posts 46 |
Earth Angle Thank You so very much for your review and comments! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
nice, and fun song you have created ARCTIC WIND |
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spunkygirl Junior Member
since 2007-09-18
Posts 46 |
Artic Wind I'm so very glad you liked Mike's Song thank you for the visit. |
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