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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonder Land As I lay myself down to sleep The sandman sprinkles some sleeping sand So I will fall asleep And drift off to wonder land A dream world, full of magical places Valleys, forests, and a big castle Full of flowers and hearts And the water is clear like a crystal Chocolate ponds and candy-canes And Cotton candy trees There is a lake full honey And islands floating on top of cookies Fields full of yummy fruits With raspberries, and blue berries A waterfall full of fruits delight With mangos, and a swirl of cherries I never want this dream to end It fell with the last of the sleeping sand Farewell, you will be missed I will come back one day, to my wonder land |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes we need to go to a wonderland to relax our body and souls...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
James Michael- that so true, we need to, and thats why I have created the portal of the wonderland thank you ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
That's what is good about having a poetic soul. We all have a wonderland to escape to and share with others. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is wonderful portal you have created, however my dietician would be horrified if I went there as I would probably put on pounds just dreaming about this land. Good imagination, good job. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
marchmadness Thank you! I love to write and i really enjoy writting about somewhere, where people can relax ARCTIC WIND [This message has been edited by Artic Wind (09-23-2007 06:59 PM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
kethry Thank you, and dont worry, the candy is 100% healthy lol ARCTIC WIND [This message has been edited by Artic Wind (09-23-2007 06:58 PM).] |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
good write, I enjoy traveling without having to go anywhere. (My girl says I'm just a lazy daydreamer, but thats why she loves me I think) |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
DennisTheMenace- Thank you, i am happy people wish they could drift of the wonderland =, well you can, just believe ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Arctic Wind ~ I would never want to wake up from a delectable dream like that, either! I liked your use of the pink font. It looks and "smells" like cotton candy! Your dream land truly is a "Wonder Land".  Marshmallow hugs and candy cane kisses, EA  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Earth Angel- thank you very much! i enjoy writting about places such as this one. bubble gum Hug! lol ARCTIC WIND |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Such a dreamy fantasy flight , this was a delicious delight Hope |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
HopeS candy and fruits more than you can chew come on down, the gateway is open wonderland awaits you ARCTIC WIND |
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ameteurpoet101 Junior Member
since 2007-09-24
Posts 18The island of sunshine, Jamaica |
I wish i cud go there right now.....ahhhhh so magical~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ameteur- thank you! oh, you could, just believe lol Thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Giving you a Hershey's chocolate kiss for that bubblegum hug! Marshmallow hug, EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ok I will take a bath (!) in the chocolate pond first and after that in the crystalline waters ... This is so pleasant and makes me smile. A deliciously sweet write. Love, Margherita   |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Earth angel Thank you that was so SWEET! lol ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita- thank you, I am so happy you enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
That was so sweet... As I close my eyes and I magine my own wonderland... it is somehow different, but the purpose and feeling is the same Thank you for the trip and hope to read from you again. Tears of Sanity~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Tears of sainty thanks, why dont you go to the fairy meadow (my first poem) candy awaits ARCTIC WIND |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Please may I have a one way ticket to wonderland, I can pay with chocolate truffles, sugared almonds or nougat ! Having read your other work I have reached 2 decisions 1: this is my favorite to date 2: You are a chocoholic! Thanks for making me smile....John |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
We all would love to have a place like this to go to...even if only a dream. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
EffJayel- why thank you! i am very flattered!  how can i thank you ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Mangus- thank you! i also enjoy reading your poems ARCTIC WIND |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sounds like the perfect dreamland to me. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Smart Chick Oh my god, thank you sooooo much ARCTIC WIND |
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