Open Poetry #41 |
It's After Twelve O'clock |
latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
It's After Twelve O'clock It's after twelve o'clock and I've listened to the news now Johnny Carson's on so I know, I've made it through the day. I think I'll write a letter no time could be better then while I'm waiting for the new Tom Synder show. Well it's two a.m. I think I'd best be going, but first I'll ask why the light is glowing behind my father's bedroom door. He said he's just resting he's allright, So I'll be getting on to bed. It's four fifteen and I awaken, while I'm up I'll look in He's still sitting in his chair the way I left him. Yes he's fine he says Yes he'd like a glass of juice. so I bring it and I'm off to bed. At least I know, we've made it through the day. It's twenty after five and I think I hear a noise, can't sleep until I check, everythings the same. Now it's close to six I say I may as well get up. It's a new day and comforting to know, he's made it through the night. January 1981 This was my beloved Dad's last days. I shall always remember him with love and devotion. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
How sad That we're always having to say goodbye. I have to believe that it's a temporary goodbye. Ida |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you James and you Ida. My Dad was my hero and shall ever be. He taught love by how he lived. I always appreciated him and will always remember. "late" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
what a beautiful poem ARCTIC WIND |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Late, sleeping with worry curses the night, your loving shows in this piece of writing my friend, of a time when your love was needed the most, your part was played and now the nights are filled with wonderful memories and dreams I am sure. We all play our part in this life the best we know how. Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing. Rick |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It must have been so comforting for your father to have his loving daughter nearby and in attendance to his needs. Yours was a very special relationship and will surely span the edges of time. Beautifully written from your tender heart. Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Artic Wind, Rick and Earth Angel, Thank you so much.I have a need to constantly express my love for this wondeful man. You know we never say enough when the time is best. Thank you for reading and sharing your views. "late" |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sneaking back to post this to my library so I can find it later. "late" |
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