Open Poetry #41 |
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Feeling Lost Without You |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia ![]() |
Feeling Lost Without You When I am feeling lost Would you search for me If I did not speak again Will I be in your memory If I am hidden from view How could I ever be found What if there is no clue Would you search around Should I leave it to fate What will the outcome be Are thoughts reachable Would you remember me Have you ever wondered What I was going through Had it not been obvious I feel lost without you Hope©2007 |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
this was beautiful, I just joined not too long ago' and i posted first poem, so i am so excited to start, have a nice day ARCTIC WIND |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Have you ever wondered What I was going through Had it not been obvious I feel lost without you" I do know this emotion. Great write HopeS. JL ![]() Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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ameteurpoet101 Junior Member
since 2007-09-24
Posts 18The island of sunshine, Jamaica |
I didnt want it to end! i'm the new girl around town and i ave'nt posted any of my poems yet i'm just content for now with appreciating peoms like urs. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful again! ARCTIC WIND |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
this touches me... and i feel i can relate... some people just seem to get the best of you, and as quickly as they came, they are out of your life forever.. |
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