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Open Poetry #41

An offer not forsaken

spunkygirl
Junior Member

since 2007-09-18

Posts 46

0 posted 2007-09-20 01:31 AM

        As you so eloquently recite on paper
          Speaking of your hearts desire

     Whisper softly in the ear of your intended
          Else it might never transpire

       You speak of having nothing to offer
     Isn't that a decision you both should make

        To a woman your love is an offer
         She would not willingly forsake

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-09-20 12:56 PM

Welcome to PIP!

This is very beautiful and also so true!

Love is the most precious gift we can offer anyone.

Love
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-09-20 03:18 PM

Enjoyed...James

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2007-09-20 03:45 PM

No, love should never be forsaken. It doesn't come around too often.
Welcome to Pip!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-09-20 10:22 PM

Hello, Spunky!

"Whisper softly in the ear of your intended"

~ I love that line!

It gave me little tingles.

spunkygirl
Junior Member

since 2007-09-18

Posts 46

5 posted 2007-09-21 02:25 AM

Margherita Thank you for your kind words.

JamesMichael I'm glad you liked it.

Honeybunch Thank you very much for the warm welcome as I am very new to this.

Ms Earth Angel Thank you so very much for the warm encouragement I appreciate it.

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