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Open Poetry #41

Fleeting Moment...Time

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2007-09-18 07:54 PM

A fleeting moment forever captured
Time just as elusive as before
Fingers outstretched, hoping, waiting...
Closing my eyes

I come up empty

Wait, what is that noise?
That fluttering that is near
Sudden warmth comes pouring in
Brightness and light surrounds

Thump thump...a heartbeat
Keeping rhythm to the clock of time
No beginning...no end
Only a middle

Memories are all we have now
Those are forever
Running out of time...time...time
The warmth is gone

The wind picks up a little
Rain falls upon my face
Too bad I forgot my umbrella
Suppose it wouldn't have mattered anyway

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2007-09-19 08:57 AM

"Memories are all we have now
Those are forever
Running out of time...time...time
The warmth is gone

The wind picks up a little
Rain falls upon my face
Too bad I forgot my umbrella
Suppose it wouldn't have mattered anyway"

Melancholy, and appealing train of thoughts.
Nice write.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-09-20 10:34 AM

quote:
Keeping rhythm to the clock of time
No beginning...no end
Only a middle

I love your reflections, dear Aimster.

I hope your NOW will enter your awareness again and open up in all its vast possibilities.

Love,
Margherita

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