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Sapphire Sensations
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Sapphire Sensations |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Ocean edged in canvas of blue where meets earth, water, and sky; elements defined in perfect portrait of peace. Ever changing tides of aqua caress tan of sand slightly revising scenic scenes, comes gently the lapping against shore lines horizon softly playing natures song. Sung in perfect melody tonal utterances of captivating harmony, mesmerizing me; such sweet tranquility. Moons silver sliver dances on waters break subtly shimmering light in serene refrains, sensations surrounded by sapphire hues cradling me in timeless memories retain. "In yearning for nothing, you will be free to enjoy what you do, free to see the patterns, free to hear the music in all things." -Barbara Ann Kipfer |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful writing...James |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Such subtle serinity surrounds. Nicely penned, Gentle Spirit. MoonShadow . |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. What's with the negative picture? You looked positively attractive. John |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a lovely song of tide and time beautiful gentle Donna hugs... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My thanks to you each for stopping in. Hugs. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ This is lovely~ You drenched us in your sapphire thoughts~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Darlin' Donna, you were "mesmerizing me (with) such sweet tranquility" with this captivating poem...  So lovely. Lovin' hug, Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely poem. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You created such an attractive atmosphere, dear Donna! So beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Ever changing tides of aqua caress tan of sand slightly revising scenic scenes, comes gently the lapping against shore lines horizon softly playing natures song." Nice write. This verse sings. JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, lovely poem, Donna, and I agree with JL. |
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