Open Poetry #41 |
In The End |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
In the end it doesn't matter The reasons mean nothing now Yet if I could go back again I'd change it all somehow Knowing you Has made me who I am today As my thoughts drift to you Here they will always stay In the end nothing changed Yet time seems to stand still For in the depths of my heart I realize the pain and love are real I will carry this love deep inside For then it can always be kept The tides will rise and fall once more Memories in the sand have all been swept Roaring ocean, rocks so sharp From white to black we go No beginning and no end For we already know In the end it doesn't matter The reasons mean nothing now Yet if I could go back again I'd change it all somehow |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Softly melancholic. A beautiful write, dear Aimster. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Amy, your gift for writing poetry serves you well ~ and your readers! Your spill of emotions flows so smoothly down the page ~ and into the hearts of those who read your moving mots. ~ May your pain lessen with the passing of time. Loving hug, Linda |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Thank you for your lovely encouraging replies. I clearly remember why I love PIP so much. Amy "Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Don't we all....do we not all, every one of us, wish these things? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling one, How wonderful to read your beautiful words again, I only dropped in to reply to Keth and found your gem shining in these pages blue. Truly you have a wonderful gift and thank you so very much for sharing the beauty with us. This is so soft like a half remembered echo, or a whisper of song on a breeze. Beautiful as I said, you really are a special writer and yes darling girl I love it. As always Mushy X x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
I think all poetry should contain wisdom, and this looks like the most reflective and truthful poem I've read today. Amazing how none of your words are empty esthetics, possible to relate to each one! Pops |
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