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shea chaz moan
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shea chaz moan |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I have heard her voice sometimes slipping through an easy wind like an arrow in a mask she tiptoes early in her sultry the shea chaz in comfortable velvet dancing dawns in her range coat and boot gypsies buttoned down like freckles teasing the eyes she breasts my imagination topless in her jaunty red playing with my triggers like cowboys and doctors whispering jesse james thank yous with her eyes __________ daark |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark~ I want to pay you a supreme compliment ... you write with the ink of the most creative master word-painter~ I think that to sit across the table from you, drinking in your eyes as you poeticize would be a wonderful way to spend a morning~ Every word, every nuance leaves the reader pondering for a very long time ... and that is a good thing~ Thank you for being a poet~  You definitely get to my *sigh* place~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
oh marge, I would be blessed to sip a hot morning brew with your eyes and listen to your thoughts, thanks so much lady friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Though I don't know what "shea chaz" means (a name?), I enjoyed your poem greatly, especially dancing dawns in her range coat Love, Margherita ps I think I got it while reading the words aloud! [This message has been edited by Margherita (09-19-2007 03:20 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar' thank you for the read..yes a name and event I observe from time to time. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
See D? I've been tellin you for years....bind it in leather baby...  I'd keep mine right on the night stand within reach....always...  Loved this darkD.  "In yearning for nothing, you will be free to enjoy what you do, free to see the patterns, free to hear the music in all things." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thank you for the read |
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turbogirl New Member
since 2007-09-26
Posts 1 |
Ah! What mysteries must lay inside the mind that could so eloquently, and quietly, observe the ordinary circumstances of reality! Bravo, my friend. Ms Chaz |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms chaz..now I wear the blessing of your eyes, thank you for the visit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks james!! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What Marge said....with a guy twist of course. I'd like to sit and learn about how you do what you do, because you do it better than anyone. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you leave me breathlesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
stranger darlin' I agree with Ratleader you do it better than anyone |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
I am amazed... That was really wonderful  I like it a lot Tears of Sanity~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ed, thank bro, would enjoy yackin with you too sometime and getting to know the world through your eyes. ____________ ms inky, can I please come and do some lengthy CPR then?, thanks babe ___________ ladyone, you bless my lady love thank you for the moments __________ tears' thank you for reading and replying |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mercy Daark, some fine words you have pasted to our ears. Thanx. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
most humble thanks sir!! thanks Mag' |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
The undefinable poet's twist. You do it well, Sir. ~glider~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
wg, thank you for the read and words |
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