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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2007-09-17 10:03 PM


Impatient Azure

The cross hairs of autumn bear down
Arrows sped in morning mist
Sudden furrows frost has kissed
O’er rooftops spread to shudder blue

Aligned in the voice of soft summer hue
Your touch as rain
Turns streams

Plunging neckline low light scheme
Exhaled to the psalm of a panting dream
Cool cling and night scent
Dribble down grace
Amber ample sighs and space

A lashes flutter on horizons faint
Adorned in seasons yearning paint
Then pull, the flash of understanding
Arrows sped fall never landing

Hush blue that trails low hip prevails
Astir impatient azure
Eagerly, for your return

Copyright Kkh 9/17/07


© Copyright 2007 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-09-17 10:04 PM


Sweet Poet,
did not we just
moments ago
leave winter behind?

Sigh.

It has been a short season...
but with your impatient azure,
we begin the cycle of wait,
again.




Bronzeage
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2 posted 2007-09-17 10:31 PM


A wonderful write

Type II poet. Its worth the work.

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2007-09-18 10:43 AM


A most pleasant ‘write’!

I am especially fond of imagery such as:

“cross hairs of autumn…
” Arrows sped in morning mist…”;

“voice of soft summer hue”;

“Astir impatient azure”

Applause!

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4 posted 2007-09-18 01:08 PM


Beautifully penned Kathleen.
Beauty of the changing seasons.
*Your thoughtfulness is so much appreciated!*

Heart hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Margherita
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5 posted 2007-09-18 01:16 PM


quote:
Exhaled to the psalm of a panting dream



sighing along the beauty of your words, dear TD.

Love,
Margherita

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6 posted 2007-09-18 01:17 PM


Kathleen~
There is beauty *sighing* in your ink~

LOVELY~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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JL
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7 posted 2007-09-19 07:38 AM


"The cross hairs of autumn bear down
Arrows sped in morning mist
Sudden furrows frost has kissed
O’er rooftops spread to shudder blue"

This type of day I look forward to.
Great write TD!!

JL


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~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

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8 posted 2007-09-19 04:41 PM


you are such an incredible poet
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