Open Poetry #41 |
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Of Dream |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams ![]() |
This my 9/11 poem Of Dreams Children don’t have to grow up Which gives them time to dream on I envy them a little I wish I had an excuse To close my eye lids and dream Unaware of the dark night I could take security In a sea of satin sheets To be removed from this world A life in a better world: without cruel people and death, And false lovers breaking hearts…. But a world where we accept, What we cant control is good I’d kill for a gentle soul Who doesn’t want to change me That's what is wrong in this world But then again its human... If we could dream forever Then we would remain children It’s unfortunate, the truth Bad things happen so we grow… -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thougts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos [This message has been edited by Juju (09-12-2007 08:23 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"If we could dream forever Then we would remain children It’s unfortunate, the truth Bad things happen so we grow…" ~ A thought-provoking close to this fine write. Dream on, Dear juju! Love, Peace, & Harmony, EA ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lovely thoughts here juju. Peace. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. “Childhood is the kingdom where nobody dies. Nobody that matters that is. “ Edna St. Vincent Millay . |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Provocative write, Milady. Without dreams, life is tragicaly diminished, a parody of itself. Even if the dreams never fully materialize, the striving is what matters. Thank you for sharing. MoonShadow . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Bad things have been happening and one day we become aware...James |
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Postalpara New Member
since 2007-09-11
Posts 1 |
Your poem gave me permission to dream even though I am a senior; thank you. Postalpara |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
9-11 was some shock to all of us. I remember the day I saw it on TV. I stood frozen for like 5 minutes. doing nothing and just staring. I don't like it when people do things like that. all they bring is pain, tragedies, and loss. Killing the innocence of purity and revealing the side of darkness which we forget most of the time. I Love Peace! Tears of Sanity~ |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
thank you for reading my poem every one -Juju |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ONE Of MY FAVS really! enjoyed it was worth looking back at old poems ARCTIC WIND |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed much, my friend...alas, I'm STILL a kid and intend staying that way....and my dreams are wonderful!! jwesley |
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