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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Whispers softly spoken warm breath close pressed to ear showering me with loving words reaching deep, touching hidden heart places basking in the amarous glow caught in tender moments slow soul soothing whispers. If the sun never rises I want to go down in flames I want the last thing I hear to be you whisperin' my name. Each moment together is time that we borrow so hold me tight and love me like there's no tomorrow. {Trace A} |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This reminds me of the sweetest possible pillow talk... that spoken in whispers... not because there's anyone around to overhear... but because the intimacy is that great. *S* Beautiful write!! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Breathtakingly beautiful. MoonShadow . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I haven't thought about whispers in a long time...and now I do crave them  excellent writing! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ahhha yes, those are the best kind, aren't they?  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
simply superb! MUCH (sustained) applause!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you each so much....ahhh those whispers, just something about them hmmm?  lol....again, my thanks to all. Hugs and peace. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
definitely something about those whispers gentle Donna they sound like forever beauty... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah Kate, forever is such a long time tho' I just chose to be thankful for the moments when they come. I enjoy tackling these different forms of poetry and the rictameter is one form I enjoy trying to write. Thanks sweetie.  |
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SouthernJustice Member
since 2007-12-15
Posts 159 |
Most Beautiful. "SJ" - AND TY 4 the kind word on my effort at PIP |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Donna... a stunning and whispered write! loved it! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very pleasant, artistic 'write!' I am particularly fond of the ending lines: "caught in tender moments slow soul soothing whispers." applause!! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
as an 'incurable Romantic,' I couldn't help but return to this fine 'write' for a third 'official' comment post [something I hardly ever do!] continuing applause!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all so much for reading, and Bruce, thank you for revisiting this. I am glad that you found it worthy. Peace and Happy New Year to all. ~D |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
and very softly i would like to say...how beautiful your voice sounds when in whispers |
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