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Expressive Need |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Do you ever hammer out words, scattering them onto blank pages, with a passion that rages an avalance of words, that sear the brain and boils the blood as it races to your fingers The mind sings with images, composing a symphony of sounds melding, merging, with a purpose a purpose driven by expressive eruption Writing lines with no closure hearing, driven by, a cacophony that strums from within begging to express feelings all that wells inside, not one emotion not a single vision each small piece bridging to create An effort that frames the individual linking mind with fingers until emotion climaxes Like stars searing the darkness as they fall simply yearning to be heard --- Alison |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
In my ever-most-humble opinion, this 'write' is super-excellent (finely capturing the essence of the act of writing!) very serious, long-sustained applause!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you for understanding. A |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 oh, this is a very very cool write!Yes...I have hammered far too many words! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
compelling piece of work Alison and graphically appealing too |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Yes. Ida |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Alison, This is excellent! Okay, let's make it EXCELLENT! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes indeed my sweet Ali... well done! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding piece!! I love it! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you to those of you who have read and responded to this poem. It's nice to be among those who know just what I meant when I wrote this. A |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY glad to see this exceptional 'write' return near the top of the "P.I.P.-land" queue! continuing major applause!! |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
extremely beautiful. always good poems Tom |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*goodness* I freakin love this!!  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Hey Alison! nice writing ARCTIC WIND |
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Dadygoose Member
since 2010-01-01
Posts 162A Communist country |
Ali. You do such things with my imagination here. Just imagine I am smiling … to myself .. as I reread taking me with you where words can’t go. This invites, compels the reader to hear and feel between the lines, and imagine something that defies verbal explanation, a need that defies verbal description. Or maybe it’s just my imagination playing tricks on me again. Imagine I am smiling, Because I am … J Ali. You do such things with my imagination. Just imagine I am smiling … to myself .. as I reread taking me with you where words can’t go. This invites, compels the reader to hear and feel between the lines, and imagine something that defies verbal explanation, a need that defies verbal description. Or maybe it’s just my imagination playing tricks on me again. Imagine I am smiling, Because I am … J Hey, nobody's human! |
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