Open Poetry #41 |
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DayBreak |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Nigh be the soulful morn that waits to cry that sulks before the moon is laid to rest. That crawls in wait of dark when ravens fly and join the croak at water’s leafy crest For whence the somber shadows slumber breaks and snatches light of day ‘fore darkness falls To hear the loon’s heart bleed and sorely ache and hush the cries of calves in lonesome stalls. Is then upon the cease of beggars bray and then upon the seizure of night’s thief As lofts shall hide the farmer’s new shorn hay and cows shall lie the field in wait the sheaf. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Barry, you set the tone and mood so well with the following: ~ "To hear the loon’s heart bleed and sorely ache and hush the cries of calves in lonesome stalls." You must be the "poet" in poetry! ![]() Warm hug, Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
smootheeeeeeeeeeeeeee and romantic you got me blushing ![]() |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great poem Magnus Thoroughly enjoyed it LindsayP |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
deeply romantic Barry and richly written |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The scent of morning dew pervades. Nicely done. |
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