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A Peace Less of a Dream
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A Peace Less of a Dream |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
A Peace Less of a Dream Today thinks fondly of yesterday Like a lover embracing that lonely pillow Soon to realize tomorrow was never meant As precaution cautiously breezes through the window Mixed with the smells of sulfur and never morrow Flowing into the nostrils of angels and men alike Who await with happiness and butterflies The sounds of death and slumber When the final battle of men and souls are lost To jealousy and unforgiveness The rights of which were never earned But still we judge and decide with limited knowledge Thinking us smarter than we truly are For even an infant can destroy a toy With little thought of you and me So here we are at last Finally getting it! Finally getting over ourselves But now it is too late As the whistles and horns blow And in every hand the bible And under every breath a song Singing to those same whistles and horns Not sure if the end of it all is manmade Or heavenly kissed without forgiveness. Marcel |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Jealousy and unforgivness two brothers to avoid Nice work adagio |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
much liked ! cool flow to this one ~Jw In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Could feel the struggle, to the perfect end. Well done. |
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