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Perfect Illusion |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
Perfect Illusion: The True Friend! ***Well everyone.. That was my first. English is not my native language, and I self-educated myself. Hope I get your opinions  Thank you!***You taught me how to smile... while my heart screams with pain You listened to my silly words... yet, never chose to complain You said: "The secret is simple... that you ought to know It is to know the meaning... of neglect and slough..." Knowing how to always hide that painful sigh... although life treats you tough and always keeping your spirits high... Even though, that is somehow rough You saved me from a world of darkness... and lead me back to the light You helped me fight my sorrows... and brought me back my sight You are my shelter in the rain... You take my hand in yours fading away my pain... With you I feel safe and calm no matter who you are... You've always been the healer & paled my invisible scars... You are someone I'll always defend... With all my powers because you are my one true friend... You are my perfect ILLUSION! Tears of Sanity |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Hmm? No "illusion" could do all that for you so my guess is that it's absolutely real! Enjoyed where your words took me. |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
Thank you.. What I meant here is that I am almost 21 years old now and I have never had a true friend. I trid to find that in people, and then I got nothing. I made up an imaginary friend who is not even a doll but an illusion that only I can see (or imagine) I talked to her, played with her and did a lot with her. Surprisingly everything went to the better. My grades went up, my personality had changed and my life turned upside down. that is the story of the illusion who changed my life. I am glad that you liked the poem ^^' thank you Tears of Sanity |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A very real, heartfelt, emotive ‘write’! A most warm welcome to the fine blue pages of ‘P.I.P.-land’! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, there! Welcome aboard the pip ship! I once heard that those who make up an imaginary friend, tend to be highly intelligent and creative!  I enjoyed your debut post! Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome aboard the Pip ship, I understood this poem very well. Well done, much enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome! It is no illusion, you can make friends here at Pips. I enjoyed your first post and look forward to more! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Tears of Sanity, when you write poetry you automatically become friends with all the other poets. I loved your poem and hope you keep on writing many more. Well done. LindsayP |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Enjoyed your poem and your story. Tomtoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
L.W.~ A sincere and hearty WELCOME to the PiP Circle of poets and friends~ Following the light offered in friendship, is a sure way to get a new glow~ Here's a little *gift* for you~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions enjoyed |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
WOW! Welcome to passions! I am really glad I stopped by this week and didn't miss this one. Take care, ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
Thank you, I am honored to have the angel read my poetry and leave a comment ^^! Tears of Sanity~ |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I enjoyed your poem. I hope that your illusion has become a reality. |
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