Open Poetry #41 |
Pitures From the Past |
LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
PICTURES FROM THE PAST I stand again at lovers leap With a heart that’s beating fast, And in my mind the memories creep And I see pictures from the past. I see again a maiden fair With hair of auburn hue, And I tongue tied can only stare With thoughts of I love you. I loved the ground on which she trod With her figure fair and trim, While in my prayers I prayed to God, Though I thought my chances then were slim. But perseverance paved the path Though faint the heart may be, And looking back in aftermath Future plans were plain to see. Looking back on life’s display For the dye has long been cast, That girl is still as fair today As in those pictures from the past. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A beautiful write Lindsay, to have known love and kept it is a gift indeed from life, many will wish the same my friend. Much enjoyed, take care and be well. Rick |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Picture perfect! I have a suspicion that the reason that she is still as fair today as she was back then, is because she is loved and adored by a man like you. Loving Light, EA |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Very nice, I really enjoyed your thoughts. "late" |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
To Rick, Earth Angel and Late Arrival, Thank you all for your very kind response, I think my wife must take most of the credit For our 55 years of wedded bliss, take care, LindsayP |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Heartwarming sentiments and memories penned to perfection...I love it when adoration for a spouse lasts a lifetime. Beautiful write. ~K |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful, I believe that someone you love is always beautiful to you...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Klassy Lassy and James Michael Thank you kind folks for your response LindsayP |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Romantic.... Some wistful longing....felt this before. You brought back the feeling for me. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
FNG, I'm glad I stirred your memories. Thank you. LindsayP |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I was taken with this piece because I married a girl that I met in college. And even after all these years I still love her the same. |
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