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i could not write today
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i could not write today |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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I tried to write today but was flooded in the afterthoughts and burdened with "what will become of this" i tried to recreate that almost perfect morning in deciphering the script the stars may come to write or not, regarding such this rendevous of two, tenaceous fools like us i could compose no single sonnet nor revel in this song sung blue i could not write today stuck beneath the muddled water not having been accustomed to the simple bliss as such this thing between the two of us it seems i'm best at words when love entwines itself, choking in its trenches the prelude to its requiem as it slowly fades away [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-07-2007 09:13 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you can always write babe...and some days you are awesome..as today |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Whatever you chose to write, it always comes out awesome Mish. Enjoyed your thoughts here hon.  after a fall I get back up, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"it seems i'm best at words when love entwines itself, choking in its trenches the prelude to its requiem as it slowly fades away " Now this, is perfect, just perfect. Love this write. JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This is it! That which moves us to write. I love to read you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goddess, I wish I "could not write" like you!!! I find your poetry to be spell-binding. "it seems i'm best at words when love entwines itself, choking in its trenches the prelude to its requiem as it slowly fades away" ~ See what I mean! You are a 'poetessa goddessa'.  Loving hug, EA  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you all kindly for reading and stopping by always appreciated |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
No needs for sonnets when words arrange themselves in such a captivating way when you let them flow freely. Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
damn those requiems anyway |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your touch to the water of thought, as potent as the sun and the moon. Well done. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
cant write? i think you were disillusioned then you wrote that very well I am the little cracked mirror |
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Dull Glitter Junior Member
since 2007-09-25
Posts 11Iowa, USA |
Consiter this poem thoroughly enjoyed. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
For someone, who could not write, you sure did great on this one. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Whilst you are excellent at "songs sung blue", the same applies to you with songs sung golden, like this one! - Owl |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'm going to go outside for a while now, and just...think. I haven't written -- I mean really written -- in a long time. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading and being here with me |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
V. interesting 'write'! GREAT ending! serious applause!! |
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