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Open Poetry #41

The Way We Were

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-09-06 06:07 PM

                          Eve shut the door and closed her eyes

and imagined what is was like when she and Howard used to visit Hardee's and cherish each other's chili cheese fries

why was she surprised she missed Howard so much?

she could surmise the sincerity of his touch

his sunrise used to greet her with such gentleness

even now his mental kiss ....

                              [Eve shook her head]

                               being this sentimental

had to be detrimental

she needed Howard's rental car

                                             now

                                                                              love,

                                                                              eve

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-09-06 06:44 PM

Disillusioned!

Effectful write.

Love,
Margherita

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

2 posted 2007-09-07 03:22 PM

thanks margherita

zapple
New Member

since 2007-09-09

Posts 4
Englishman Living in the U.S

3 posted 2007-09-10 12:22 PM

Enjoyable whimsical writing, made me laugh. They should make T shirts with `Sentimental is detrimental` written on them!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-09-10 01:15 AM

Like this...James

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