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Crown of Sonnets #7
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Crown of Sonnets #7 |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
A crown of sonnets or sonnet corona is a sequence of sonnets usually addressed to some one person, and/or concerned with a single theme. Each of the sonnets explores one aspect of the theme, and is linked to the preceding and succeeding sonnets by repeating the final line of the preceding sonnet as its first line, and by having its final line be the first line of the succeeding sonnet. With seven sonnets, the first line of the first sonnet is repeated as the final line of the final sonnet, thereby bringing the sequence to a close. This Crown of Sonnets, is dedicated and presented to someone very special. Seven facets of a precious gem reflecting the glow in my heart. "The Glory" (Crown of Sonnets #7) We love each other near or far apart, no matter how impossible it seems. Forever, soul to soul and heart to heart, wherever songs are sung and dreamers dream. Where gardens bloom with jasmine in the spring and lilac love of Wedgwood blue is there, our hearts will meld and souls begin to sing while fragrant love bouquets will fill the air. We dance beneath the moon and starlit skies while breathing in the air that is so sweet. The happiness reflected in our eyes, she is my Queen of hearts, I am complete. In regal glory, splendor to behold a Princess most divine like days of old. MoonShadow . |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where gardens bloom with jasmine in the spring and lilac love of Wedgwood blue is there, our hearts will meld and souls begin to sing while fragrant love bouquets will fill the air. ~*~ I am enjoying the serenity this brings me, Ken. Thank you so very much for sharing all of these with us. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KenKenKen~ My absolute admiration for this crowning touch to your corona beauties~ Your soulmate is very fortunate indeed~ And .. one can tell that you feel most fortunate too~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Where gardens bloom with jasmine in the spring and lilac love of Wedgwood blue is there, our hearts will meld and souls begin to sing while fragrant love bouquets will fill the air." ~ My favourite scents and my favourite colour!  This was a brilliantly shining jewel with which to top your crown of sonnets! Kenneth, you reign supreme and are in fine poetic form. Giving you a warm, appreciative hug, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dang! There I go again forgetting to save a poem of yours, the first time around! lol ...Saved! Thank you for my growing library of your exquisite literary works! Linda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Where gardens bloom with jasmine in the spring and lilac love of Wedgwood blue is there, our hearts will meld and souls begin to sing while fragrant love bouquets will fill the air." all that is needed in such a garden is an oaken rocker a head resting on a shoulder a word whipered in an ear the jasmine smells so sweet as it drifts past and this is perfect Kenneth |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 The series was wonderful gentle man tho' I hate to see it come to an end. Exceptional talent and heart you have shared with us kind sir.  after a fall I get back up, |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Where gardens bloom with jasmine in the spring and lilac love of Wedgwood blue is there, our hearts will meld and souls begin to sing while fragrant love bouquets will fill the air.  [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (09-07-2007 01:40 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"A Princess most divine" that has inspired you beautifully. My compliments. Love, Margherita  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ken, these were the most lovely sonnets~~ Maureen |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Awesome work, MoonShadow, I have followed your sequence from the beginning. I do think, however, this last one (#7) is your best. There is only one small suggestion I would like to make: 1st stanza: "..impossible it seems"...change to "...impossible may seem"...thus achieving rhyme with "dream", while retaining (I believe) the meaning of the second line. The choice is yours - your sonnet. Again, great work, and inspiration to me as well. Cheers, CG |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You kept me spell-bound. Thank you for the beautiful sonnets, your incredible talent as a poet, and for showing more of the inner you. Alison |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
When I read the first one I decided to wait until all had been posted and what a worthwhile wait. From 1 to 7 they are all wonderful reads for the romantic in me. You have been well inspired! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very well written, flow was impeccable. Nice write!! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
All of you dear friends… My grateful appreciation to all of you kindred spirits who so graciously responded to the “Crown of Sonnets”. The aura of your glow warmed my soul and your kind words of encouragement touched upon my heart. This humble poet thanks you most sincerely. MoonShadow . |
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