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Hibernation |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Hibernation The leaves turned and fell later this year than last life, these days, is slower than those warmer days of past I'm in no real big hurry to find love and keep it you reap what you sow, and I planted silence, now I reap it. Harvest arrived here stumbling tumbling on shards of laughter turning them into liquid, just to freeze them the season after. I suppose I'll have to get up and start moving around eventually wave goodbye to the moon and forget how you lost your love for me. But for now, I stay in hibernation and remember the life love used to bring it hurts to move so fast right now so I lay asleep and wait for Spring. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
One day, I know you do not believe it now, you will think back and smiles will appear across your face. Life for you is still ahead and because of what you have experienced you will be all the better for it. But only you can make the changes to live. Life is too beautiful to throw away. You Are Loved. |
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Rod Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 149Auckland New Zealand |
This is beautifully poetic! Well done. Write on! It is better to light a single candle than to curse the darkness. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and I planted silence, now I reap it. love this line Dixie..  M |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This poem left me speechless. I think it is among the best that I have read here in PiP. I love it. Alison |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you each for commenting it's an oldie of mine, posted for lack of muse these days glad you enjoyed |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"But for now, I stay in hibernation and remember the life love used to bring it hurts to move so fast right now so I lay asleep and wait for Spring." Great write!! And, spring is just around the corner. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
You see - You and I ARE kindred spirits, that harvest on our minds, as well as spring, and saving up the energy to face it. Well done as always, and I am glad to see your work here. I enjoy it so very much! {{{hugs}}} Caroline |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
It's a great oldie Dixie and love will find you even when you're hibernating |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
Your words are like poetry...teehee....seriously you never cease to amaze me by the pieces you put on here....will you ever get your work published, Dixie?????? |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
simply wonderful Dixie - just like you! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks everyone for such wonderful comments Youngatheart, I have thought about publishing from time to time...eventually I probably will. Thanks for your support, and good to see you |
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