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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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What brings us to this point Where today and yesterday feel no different the thoughts we have today seem similar to those of yesterday where hours and minutes are tranferrable not really seeing much beyond this present having thoughts dissappear as fast as they appear the blur that was once a thought now lying idle in some long lost corner of my mind. life is such a hectic job or is my job part of my hectic life? i've pondered all the answers and look forward to winters cold where the minutes can be minutes and time shall allow me a moment for a thought. until then forgive me if I forget all that I've forgotten. |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
i can really relate to these richard |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
life is such a hectic job or is my job part of my hectic life? Rich, nicely penned I so love reading your work! RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda the way I've been feeling lately myself nice work |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh this so sounds like my life right now...one big blur...nicely written |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
you've written that season of life we've all know . . . and some of us quite well! Robert |
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