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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2007-02-17 10:26 AM

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Her Mention

I’m subject to her pension
To her mention of intention
Her dabble in inequities
My rabble of iniquities

She holds me in a dreamers wile
By showing me her subtle smile
And glances me with flutters lid
To make me bow her uttered bid

I try my best to fill her need
To bring about a happy deed
But life abides on cliffs abyss
It just won’t do to blow a kiss

And I must ride a constant knight
Her favor as the bright sun light
And pledge each day to grace her way
And be the dove so she will stay

And this I do with all my might
Each and every day and night

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

1 posted 2007-02-17 11:10 AM

This day and age you have to..Seems like their is always vultures waiting for the dove to fly away. Nice poem Seymour

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-02-17 09:46 PM

lovely write Sy

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

3 posted 2007-02-19 07:16 PM

You make me smile so often.
Thank you for that.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2007-02-20 02:03 AM

oh I like what Alison said! you make me smile too Sir Sy!!

thank you RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Rod
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 149
Auckland New Zealand

5 posted 2007-02-20 02:15 AM

Oh yes!! I can relate to this!
Brilliant, Seymour....quite brilliant!

The greatest thing you can do for another is not just to share your own riches...but to reveal to him his own.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2007-02-20 03:42 AM

Oh, Sy! Just a big *smooch* for being such a dove!

...jo

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2007-02-20 08:43 AM

To all the above, I thank you for the sweet replies and just a note to say I will be gone for a week so don't worry.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2007-02-20 09:08 AM

Oh Sy!
I'm so pleased I got well enough to read this.
Know why?
Because I would have been worried whilst you were away!
I'm nearly all better...so
I don't think you can catch my flu bug now
if I were to give you a

and a

Hurry back~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2007-02-20 09:28 AM

And I must ride a constant knight
Her favor as the bright sun light
And pledge each day to grace her way
And be the dove so she will stay

And this I do with all my might
Each and every day and night

and as it should be...