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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England 
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This was originally posted as a response to, and inspired by, one of Bea's poems, but I thought I would elevate it to a stand alone piece. Thank you grandma..... Soul Mates Soul mates born of ethereal time never break the silver line of thread that joins their souls as one even when a lifetime's run Forever in each other's care nothing can divide the pair who share a love that's meant to be united in eternity...... Ivor G Davies The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past. [This message has been edited by ivordavies (02-15-2007 06:06 PM).] |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
I think the first stanza can stand by itself. That being said, I like it. Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Edward, Sorry, as I transfered this from a response and edited it a bit straight into the 'submit' section. I think you commented as I was altering it. Hope I haven't changed it too much for you, Thanks for responding so quickly, Ivor |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Yes yes, this version is much better. Very good. I think poetry and filmmaking are very similar; it's all in the editing.  Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My sentiments exactly! I am pleased that you posted, in Open, your reply to Grandma Bea's wonderful poem. It most assuredly, stands well on its own!  I enjoy reading poems on soul mates ~ and this is one of the most eloquently expressed ones that I have read! Love & Eternal Lightm Linda |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Well done. Enjoyed the read |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Linda, trutodaraiders, Again thank you for reading and responding. One ting that springs to mind about soulmates is that they have walked together for a long time and are usually fairly well balanced souls... Ivor |
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