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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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recipient gorgeous breeze of love different circumstances accomplished beauty elegance simple manners submitting largeness of soul shall return in thought in time assent into child of nature stories unfold sketching mortal life enthusiasm speculation aroused by some profound and vivid imagination in you intervene the in-between sustaining life designed by God emancipated in your arms clearing the mind to sweet confession partakes the woman in her until shes nearly blind "she was" you know... blind oh how her heart bled in safe asylum, fear perpetrated determination the hopeless trials of life pulled you from her arms motives, intellect, material wealth you name it sultry woman, much younger then yourself perfect stupidity validity of these claims suppressed narritives of weaknesses covered his soul he cheated and she knew she knew she knew deep chagrin boasting better that cherished truth oh inconsistency the jewel of spilt human blood wrath of shock murderous should have beens sighs and times indignant becomes a church of mockery dictates privileged sympathy of destiny of lonliness where personal observation becomes flesh of flesh woman mother homely proverb ignorance a fraudulent sale the degradation darkly fits you know the place that kisses lips no longer it being a dreamy myth sacrificing texture but oh to the groan of misplaced becomes the wife of reproof profiting by those earnest tears the pain and imprisonment of distance lulls the child to sleep hush now, shhhhh for necessity of other days the sojourner builds a skyscraper with a swinging hammock lingering perceptive kindness deep in thought engrossed and making love with memories assuring her spellbound entrance where he never leaves and she gains the summit by light of the moon with you in all her thoughts telling her of your arrival in a place where time was lost |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Excellent, I can never read your poetry in one breath.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ You take a thought and squeeze more out of it than most of us can do~ This one is full word-juice~  Enjoyed~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Lovely Lee! A stirring story to be sure! One that expressed the trials and tribulations of a woman's journey ~ jubilation, determination, speculation, resignation, imagination, indignation ~ and emancipation! Oh, and by the way, I totally concur with the the responses of both Seymour and Marge!  Luvsya! Linda |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Lee...All I can say is WOW much think about. My favorite part...Paul oh how her heart bled in safe asylum, fear perpetrated determination the hopeless trials of life pulled you from her arms motives, intellect, material wealth you name it sultry woman, younger then yourself perfect stupidity validity of these claims were suppressed narritives of weaknesses covered his soul he cheated and she knew she knew she knew ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"sultry woman, younger then yourself perfect stupidity validity of these claims were suppressed narritives of weaknesses covered his soul he cheated and she knew she knew she knew" Great write Lee J. I enjoy the way you take a reader in totally unsuspecting, then wham! So reality riveting to anyone who takes the time to read you. Enjoyed. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I agree with all of the above and oh how I love this... "she was" you know... blind |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
LeeJ... I love the words you speak - beautiful always! thank you .. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
LeeJ - You go so very deep in your writings and when I prepare to follow I know that the journey is going to be worthwhile. I'm never disappointed. Thank you!! |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
You are 1 of the best free style writers I know. Enjoyed the read immensly |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"she was" you know... blind oh how her heart bled in safe asylum ~*~ Facets, prisms, and cold, hard, ice... still, why does it look so warm, life? |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
This my love I understand, but only through empathy. Not experience. But please accept this as my reason to read all you write. I learn all the time and understand more and more. best martyjo |
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