Open Poetry #40 |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
noticed prints outside the entrance compelling hearts to turn and see the shadows deep and deep’ning cast in shades of reverie as dreams invite the dreamer so do thoughts entreat the mind of closer prints that wade the soul and kiss the pavement kind that leads the soul-led pathway soft to the gateway of heart’s hall and enters safe into the haven carved, that softly serves the fall to catch the steps that stride the soul and rest the prints that go un-noticed when the path leads so far away and seems so long ago when noticed once, ’tis safe to say, is noticed yet again |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Beautiful poem. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Yes, she echoed... 'Tis safe to say...it is Very Beautiful |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
to catch the steps that stride the soul and rest the prints that go un-noticed when the path leads so far away and seems so long ago when noticed once, ’tis safe to say, is noticed yet again love this! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Up where this belongs |
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