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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2007-02-13 08:10 AM

The Haiku Moon

The moon lights aglow
Silver strings the puppet show
Dancing leaves below

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2007-02-13 08:22 AM

Seymour~

Worded moonlight twirls
Caught within your swirl of ink
Delightful poet~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2007-02-13 08:22 AM

Brava sir Sey. G'mornin my friend.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-02-13 08:46 AM

this inhabits the heart...

well done Sy

Feeling better?

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2007-02-13 08:55 AM

Marge,
A delightful comment.

Good morning Gentle Spirit.

LeeJ,
A good place to be and yes I am getting better. Thank you sweetie.

sewasham
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since 2006-09-11

Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA

5 posted 2007-02-13 09:09 AM

A beautiful Haiku and it rhymes to boot. Excellent Seymour. Take care and Have fun. Steve

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2007-02-13 09:18 AM

sewasham
Thank you my friend.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2007-03-05 04:58 PM

I have a particular fondness for haikus... yes, indeed! *S*

Lovely! *S*

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

8 posted 2007-03-05 05:28 PM

leaves dance oe'r the lands
on pale moonlight's silver strands
kissed by lunar hands

Nice production of 'Night's Theatre' Seymour...

dwgpoet
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since 2007-03-05

Posts 122
FL, USA

9 posted 2007-03-05 10:22 PM

MOON Lights' 3 Layers

MOON lit night over

clouds DABBED into navy BLUE

oVer Splashings oVer Mounds

copyright dwgpoet 2007

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

10 posted 2007-03-05 11:39 PM

Too much to bear, this
excruciating wonder;
suddenly -- haiku!

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Sunshine

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Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2007-03-06 07:25 AM

Between barest limbs
Cool white face of light peeks through
Mourning dove awakes

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2007-03-06 08:50 AM

~Light of March moon is
prancing across the night sky
I pause ... then ... I sigh~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2007-03-06 09:47 AM

so pretty

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

14 posted 2007-03-06 08:51 PM

your haiku
tripped sliver threw my mind
Sir Sy

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

15 posted 2007-03-06 09:35 PM

I watched a haloed moon over the mountains kissing the treetops...It must have been just so you would write this pretty haiku... and,boy, I've missed you!

~K

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

16 posted 2007-03-07 10:09 AM

great imagery...in so few words you have painted so many scenes

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