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sep'rate souls
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
thy love ’tis tender true o love besought as veils of virtue wrought, unfold desire and sing in quiet choir tones unsought of gentleness, as longing hearts aspire to lean and learn in others arms sublime to have and hold with special charms bereft of platitudes and expectations—time, it stands, it stills and surely all that’s left of sep’rate souls when love’s encircling snare ensnares the hearts of lovers’ quest divine and molds personas several to share the trail of life as one in one in kind caressing moments shared as love is found in hearts enshrined where hope doth yet abound |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
steavenr It must be my mood but I enjoyed your write. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
thank you Seymour...and I find myself in smiles over your comment...I am not a romantice writer, but alas it is February, and from time to time I need to write in measured form and rhyme so that I can feel confortable in my favorite, more 'undisciplined' styles |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Smiling too. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
February or not, I could never write like this so I do admire it |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
to lean and learn in others arms sublime to have and hold with special charms bereft of platitudes and expectations—time, it stands, it stills and surely all that’s left oh my! I love these lines!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Found this to be stirring my mind... inspiring, every time I read it. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
inspiring indeed, this was absolute.... sighs |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"as veils of virtue wrought, unfold desire and sing in quiet choir tones unsought" sheer beauty a sigh here too |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I thoroughly enjoyed the rhyme, rhythm, form, language and content of this absolutely exquisite piece of writing!  EA |
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